Review Detail of Soul_in_Distress in A Gift of Fire

So I've read through about 50 chapters of this book amd so I'd like to leave my thoughts for anyone who wants to pick up this book. First off, the beginning 15 chapters aren't great in terms of writing or storytelling (my opinion based off other novels I've read) but after you get through those first set, things start to pick up and the writing gets better, the characters are more developed and the author starts to really show some pretty good worldbuilding. Second, I like how there isn't a system or star ranking style that defines everything. that trope is overused and so this is a nice difference. Also the Mc isn't some conniving or overly smart but poor dude. he is pretty average and makes average mistakes and choices at first which i think gives his character more room to grow and more relatable. Overall it's a pretty rough start so far but it gets better every chapter. there are only 50 chapters as of writing this so there is so much more that could happen