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Just a lowkey Filipino author! I write because I love to, but I am not still good at it, hopefully, y'all can bear with me. Don't hesitate to drop your thoughts about my story to help me to better. <3
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Wow! Honestly... It felt like I was there in every scenery. I can imagine what's happening because of the well-defined characteristics of each and every detail. Overall, it was good. The writing quality is good, simple words were chosen with great impact for me as a reader. The story development, honestly... I can't still state that it was totally great, I suggest having more chapters in which the reader can fully see the character's development too. I love the characters, the roles of Imani and Lola specifically ^^- but wait, Desmond is so cute lmao. Yaayyy! I'm having fun reading it, more chapters, please! Keep it up, author! You're doing great~!
Wow! After reading other chapters of this story, I automatically added it to my library. Good job author-nim! This is really good. Natural happenings are much relatable. I'm not good at this but, I have seen some grammatical errors. Nevertheless, you did great! **: I'm not yet done with this, so yeah, will definitely continue reading it tomorrow!