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Wow! Honestly... It felt like I was there in every scenery. I can imagine what's happening because of the well-defined characteristics of each and every detail. Overall, it was good. The writing quality is good, simple words were chosen with great impact for me as a reader. The story development, honestly... I can't still state that it was totally great, I suggest having more chapters in which the reader can fully see the character's development too. I love the characters, the roles of Imani and Lola specifically ^^- but wait, Desmond is so cute lmao. Yaayyy! I'm having fun reading it, more chapters, please! Keep it up, author! You're doing great~!

Ugh! Niall 😞

Wow! After reading other chapters of this story, I automatically added it to my library. Good job author-nim! This is really good. Natural happenings are much relatable. I'm not good at this but, I have seen some grammatical errors. Nevertheless, you did great! **: I'm not yet done with this, so yeah, will definitely continue reading it tomorrow!

This story is interesting. I like how the two sisters have their own strengths and unique characteristics, especially Hei Lin. You deserve the 5 stars on character design author! Good work!

Wait! How can I translate this feeling into text? Lol. What a great artwork! Including the whole content, I like the names of the characters too! It really fits their roles. I honestly have nothing to say, it was great. Keep it up! Wanted to read more of your chapters. Fighting!

Naira is so cute. Can I pinch her cheek? Lol, keep on messing up with her Ayan! When will these two get married? Please let them get married as soon as possible!

I was laughing too hard. Chapter one catches my attention already! I honestly don't know what to say anymore, except, great job!