HairyChicken42

You definitely repeat yourself way to much and try to describe things more than needed that often make you repeat yourself more than you need to. But still thanks for the chapter

No more curse words or we’ll be rated R

And now instead of PG, we are PG-13

I also suggest some grammatical changes, because I keep hear “a testament to” or “of” and also “our shared passion” which could just be our passion instead. I just feel like you are using filler words and repeating the same phrase over and over in slightly different ways to sound fancy. Don’t get me wrong I really like the story, but, don’t sacrifice content just to sound fancy with every line. After a while it starts to get annoying

Hey man, how many more of these chapters are there, just a number will do. Kinda want to get back into the main part of the story involving Austin because it feels like there is no progression for the last like 18 chapters.

The two girls managing his books I think is this chap’s focus

Sil was replaced tooo

NO!! Not my bois!

Didn’t hikel just pray to immortui?