Akrazert

yeah this story has been redone alot its pretty good at the start when it gets more ridiculous it starts to fall apart still a neat concept

is this dropped?

is this dropped this seems like it could be really entertaining hopefully you continue

how is Ned in this chapter hes already dead this chapter makes no sense at all

could be solid but you gave it yo way too early hope you found something you enjoy if not come back and finish your fanfic

could be solid but basically barely started then stopped neat thought though

could be good has a decent flow can feel the ai creeping up and was sad to see it drop but it was a good attempt

the drowned god could fall under the old gods area just not worshiped by the first men because they were more into trees and nature i could be wrong though I'm just pretty sure the old gods are basically everything but the seven on westeros and rhlor would be an old god too but hes foreign so theyre probably not as receptive of it plus the fire sacrifices really didnt leave a good memory in westeros mind

I think he got the name mixed up on this guy Yuki or yukio tsubashi there isnt a captain named that

honestly could be an ok book but it clear plagiarism you can change witcher to devil hunter all you want 99% of the other stuff is stolen and honestly that wouldn't be bad if it was in the fanfic section but your making money off of the original work which is immoral and illegal i just hope webnovel catches you before you both get sued for copyright infringement because this is blatant theft. its a decent story but you shouldn't be charging for it thats theft if you cant com up with an original story just read or write a fanfic which this clearly is but you had to make money off of it which is trash. I rarely wish ill upon authors but I hope you get whats coming to you in the form of a lawsuit that takes everything you earned from this