let's just say u write beautifully,it's a very good story with a nicely written description,plot and background.the story from the very beginning sucks u in and leaves u wanting more.hope u keep the good work

I really like the book.the beginning was a little dull but it got better and better. There was the occasional grammar mistakes but what author doesn't have those. I got a little caught off guard by the change in perspective but I later got used to it. The description at the beginning also was a little lacking at the beginning but I think later in the book you improved. Overall it was such a nice book and it is the kind of book I would gladly wait for an update (that's a good thing because I am a very impatient person)