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realmarniemoo

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I cry so much in my sleep

2020-08-16 JoinedPhilippines
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  • realmarniemoo
    realmarniemoo3yr
    Posted

    Whoa. To be honest, I am not into this kind of stories but this one captivated my interest! I can see a lot of potential to your work, author. Keep writing!

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    Shadow Lord Reborn
    Fantasy · DarkDestiny
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  • realmarniemoo
    realmarniemoo3yr
    Posted

    Ooh. This is a very nice start. Auo is my guy hahha I like how your portrayed his character. I feel excited what's going to happen to him next. Great job author!

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    Zhoro's Universe:Loose Screws
    Fantasy · iam_adh
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  • realmarniemoo
    realmarniemoo3yr
    Commented

    he's my guy. HAHAHHA

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    Zhoro's Universe:Loose Screws
    Fantasy · iam_adh
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  • realmarniemoo
    realmarniemoo3yr
    Posted

    Whoa, that was really good! after reading it, I wanted more. Great job author! To be honest it was so hard to pinpoint an error because it's perfect! I wish it was longer :(

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    Yanhua
    Urban · LinYang
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  • realmarniemoo
    realmarniemoo3yr
    Commented

    when I read coffee i am just ecstatic

    "Coffee is fine?"
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    Capture The Elusive Mandarin
    Urban · Jyojiko
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  • realmarniemoo
    realmarniemoo3yr
    Commented

    :(((((

    Ch 7 Again
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    Yanhua
    Urban · LinYang
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  • realmarniemoo
    realmarniemoo3yr
    Commented

    This is insanely good omg

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    PENANCE - The Prologue
    Fantasy · Mineva
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  • realmarniemoo
    realmarniemoo3yr
    Posted

    I am very happy that you are so far liking this story. I am having a hard time updating it due to some personal matters but, at least we're here somewhere. Thank you for the support I truly appreciate it. :)

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    Everything Hurts
    Teen · realmarniemoo
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  • realmarniemoo
    realmarniemoo3yr
    Replied to Jyojiko

    You didn't just portray, you created one!

    "Hasegawa Dana! Why in the world would you want to celebrate your eighteen birthday in China!", her mother exclaimed, using her full name, like any other Filipina mother does when they are about to pull their daughter's hair out of anger.
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    Capture The Elusive Mandarin
    Urban · Jyojiko
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  • realmarniemoo
    realmarniemoo3yr
    Commented

    Lol when I read that Filipina mother, I suddenly knew it.

    "Hasegawa Dana! Why in the world would you want to celebrate your eighteen birthday in China!", her mother exclaimed, using her full name, like any other Filipina mother does when they are about to pull their daughter's hair out of anger.
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    Capture The Elusive Mandarin
    Urban · Jyojiko
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  • realmarniemoo
    realmarniemoo3yr
    Posted

    ADDED TO LIBRARY! This is the story that I'm waiting for. Nice imagery and diction. It gives the exact picture that the chapter delineates. It's so short!! I want more! This is a masterpiece yall

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    PENANCE - The Prologue
    Fantasy · Mineva
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  • realmarniemoo
    realmarniemoo3yr
    Commented

    I'm starting to love this character

    It is said that a month of conventional warfare can take as many as tens of thousands of lives but the magician Artesia can kill as many as that in the blink of an eye.
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    PENANCE - The Prologue
    Fantasy · Mineva
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  • realmarniemoo
    realmarniemoo3yr
    Commented

    i felt that ;(

    Artesia continued to clean herself up. "I do know what they want. What all men ultimately want. But I have given my all to you." She abruptly stopped and she looked at the hero's face. "Everything. Heart, body and soul."
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    PENANCE - The Prologue
    Fantasy · Mineva
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  • realmarniemoo
    realmarniemoo3yr
    Commented

    Whoa I heard this actual voice! The imagery is on point!

    "Artesia." He calls for her with his raspy voice.
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    PENANCE - The Prologue
    Fantasy · Mineva
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  • realmarniemoo
    realmarniemoo3yr
    Posted

    Whoa! this is a great one. I am not done with all the chapters yet and I am not a fan of werewolves type of books, but this one caught me! so so good!

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    Moonlight Kiss
    Fantasy · deepu_
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  • realmarniemoo
    realmarniemoo3yr
    Replied to deepu_

    Hi! Your review made my day! ;)

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    Everything Hurts
    Teen · realmarniemoo
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  • realmarniemoo
    realmarniemoo3yr
    Replied to deepu_

    Oh wow, that's the best comment I've ever received ever. Bryan is somewhere deeper :(

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    Everything Hurts
    Teen · realmarniemoo
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  • realmarniemoo
    realmarniemoo3yr
    Commented

    Nice start, wow.

    Ch 1 The first day of a new year with as usual days
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    Moonlight Kiss
    Fantasy · deepu_
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  • realmarniemoo
    realmarniemoo3yr
    Posted

    Cute Story! This kind of gives me some romantic perspective where it leads me somewhere I already grasped, or read in a while. It's short to review I wish I could read more. But all in all, this is doing pretty good.

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    A Thousand Secret Kisses
    Fantasy · nessiaart
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  • realmarniemoo
    realmarniemoo3yr
    Posted

    This is some interesting story. You have a very nice perspective of your characters yet reading it kind of gave me a hint of what's going on. Kind of a foreshadowing as it seems. Keep writing! This is so far so good!

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    Endbringer
    Fantasy · Shionokami
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