TheInquisitor

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Indeed you have a point. But you missed on several things as well, and as you said; we should understand the full situation first. Yes, it was said that the architecture exuded a sense of extraordinality but it was also specified that it was not as grand as the palace the princess lived in. In addition it was also stated and I quote, "The layout was simple and ordinary"

Critique: TheInquisitor • 10th Chapter Appraisal: Passable • 10th Chapter Characters Appraisal: In need of basic common sense • 10th Chapter World Building Appraisal: As of now, inadequate • 10th Chapter Remarks: As a reader, it is indeed acceptable for a novel's storyline and world building to go out of this world but what I find disappointing is that even the basic common sense was not integrated, just to fit in a certain concept such as "misunderstanding". Few things that I find lacking: - Going to a stranger's house and asking for help - Asking for an "ordinary person" to save someone from a monster - The MC as an "ordinary person" is willing to face a monster, unafraid. - Brushing off the reason why the "Immortal Practitioners" has an utter respect and gratitude to the MC. - People wanting your "draft" that has been in a Trash bin yet not being intrigue by the reason. - The Princess bringing her mother to someone's house when she still doesn't completely know the MC and believing he has all the answer they need. • TheInquisitor's Mandate: There are loopholes but it is a not-so-bad read to pass time.

Are you looking for this Honorable Inquisitor's appraisal? Worry not mortal, this celestial being decided to evaluate every 10th chapter. See my appraisal at chapter 10!

Critique: TheInquisitor • Chapter Appraisal: Passable • Chapter Character/s Appraisal: There's a thin line between Naivety and Stupidity. • Chapter World Building Appraisal: Weird • Chapter Remarks: In this chapter, we are starting to see the "misunderstanding" concept of the novel. The downside is that stories like this tend to be repetitive. MC met a Stranger -> MC accidentally helped -> Stranger misunderstood MC and thought he was an unparalleled expert then completely admired the MC. It is indeed challenging to create different scenarios to introduce new characters but still under the idea of "misunderstanding" and make it not repetitive. I evaluated the character like that because why does she believe that an unknown person can help solve her problem, when she's still unsure whether they are really an expert. Is it naivety or stupidity to enter a complete stranger's home? I appraised the world building weird due to the usage of the term "robot" which seems mismatched with the "Immortal Realm" setting of the novel.

Critique: TheInquisitor • Chapter Appraisal: Acceptable • Chapter Character/s Appraisal: Passable • Chapter World Building Appraisal: Passable • Chapter Remarks: The concept of the novel is one of the emerging genre, wherein the MC transmigrated into an Immortal World and a system taught him "ordinary skills" that for people of that certain Immortal Realm was something "powerful" and "incomprehensible". An example of webnovel similar to this is "It turns out I am a Dao Ancestor". The key difference is that in this novel the MC's system was gone, which could be a good point. Since it diverts from other similar novels, which in turn brings uniqueness and originality.

This Honorable Inquisitor shall now start assessing this Webnovel. Mortals! Anticipate my Divine Judgement ✴️

Critique: TheInquisitor • Final Mandate: Not that good but not that bad. Bearable. A not-so-bad read for idling times. • Personal Perspective: On-hold reading due to loss of enthusiasm.

Critique: TheInquisitor • Chapter Appraisal: Foreseeable Development • Chapter Character/s Appraisal: Typical Arrogant side character. • Chapter World Building Appraisal: Cliché Development • Chapter Remarks: Unsurprised with the flow of plot. As of now, nothing different from other "face-slapping" stories.

Critique: TheInquisitor • Chapter Appraisal: Passable • Chapter Character/s Appraisal: Passable • Chapter World Building Appraisal: Passable • Chapter Remarks: So far, typical transmigration novel formula where the Original owner was a failure but when the MC transmigrated they obtained a "cheat" that will enable them to surpass old and present generation. The first section of the chapter previews the disdain of people with the original owner's capabilities as a Beast Appraiser. Through that, it gave me a glimpse of possible future plot where, of course, the transmigrated MC will showcase his "Abilities" and shut those people off then gain their "admiration". Typical face-slapping. The latter part then provide us the foreseeable "OP" characteristics of the MC's cheat system. A not surprising occurrence.