i really like the way you write it and describe everything in detail so that the reader like me can really get the emotion and make us think that we are somehow inside the novel. Good job :D
try to read the next part i know it's kinda suck at the first or second part ( i wrote that around 2 years ago and that's the first time i tried to write sorry for the inconvinient). try to read the other parts it's getting better and better
And sorry but i write it generally first because i don't want the other people that doesn't know about the WW2 history to get confused. I'm planning to make it more detail later in other chapters
sorry i'll try to put even more detail things. And if you can help which part to improve it's even better. thx for the comment you already helped me đ
So far so good. You described everything pretty detailed and i like it but consider putting some names in the universtiy just don't put it 'X' [img=recommend] good job.