CatLover33

The grammar in the beginning was kind of rough, but maybe that was just me reading too quickly. But after those chapters the quality got much better. I’m also loving the romance and hope to see more. Overall good job author!

The book isn’t bad from what I read so far. You just need to fix some grammar here and there. Also fix the synopsis because it was kind of confusing. You should also add Jojo and Shogukei no sama tags, so people know what kind of fanfiction it is. Overall like I said it’s good so far if you ignore the slight grammar hiccups then and there. But people should definitely give it a try. I gave this a 5 star so this story can get more traction.

Author I have a question. Which fanfic would you like my powerstones to go to?

I think it’s something similar to an “oil check”. It’s something you might see sometimes in wrestling where a person mistakenly put his/her fingers up somewhere the sun doesn’t shine.

TAKE IT TAKE IT TAKE IT TAKE ALL MY POWER STONESSS

BOYS AND GIRLS THIS IS IT!!! READ IT RIGHT NOW. CLICK THAT BUTTON AND START READING.

Did anyone else think of this?

Author this story has been very interesting so far! I hope you continue to write until the end like you said. I’ll also supply you with a daily supply of powerstones aswell of course. For Motivation!

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Damn, chill bro lmao