Hannah_Misa
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Good 2 boring 2 trash Starting 1 to 100 chapters the story still good After that become boring World building no improvement Author forgot what he wrotes like some skill The competitiveness become nonsense fantical Limited villain and become dumber even not in the effect of skill Sudden harem shit Become faceslapping nothingmore Became comedy Disasters lame arrival Ridiculous plot
somewhat good from the start but later ison in the story, mc will become s7tupid which are the cases of some novel that has overpowered chrcterstics and strng backer in it. he doesn't think about the consequences of his action which is stupid. he always creates problems. if only in the story some of his love ones died and mature that is best. so overallthe story is okay the plot is okay, only mc has iq problem.
TRAAAAAASHH the mc past life was miserable and then he reincarnate becoming a racist with low eq. the romance is trash, the fmc is annoying. the world the mc is china it only tlaks about china, praisechina, nothing else. the mc gets many body cultivation techniques but he still not op, only op to same realm. thec doesn't know how to invest blank points. i read the raw.
the plot also will more interesting if his existence is unknown when he got to the red portal its sucks to think that all ur moves is being watched its like being a puppet u cannot control ur destiny something like that, but since it cannot change anymore so far the plot is good and the story dev is good the only problem is I don't feel the mc being jack of all trade