therealSkywolf202

Wdym??

At the beginning it was a bit slow but as I kept reading it got better. The characters are well developed. It's not really what I would enjoy to read but I definitely enjoyed your novel. Keep it up

I love all your details, it just makes reading the novel even better. You presented the characters very well and it isn't moving too fast, the pace is just right. I look forward to reading more of your chapters.

No problem. Thanks for reading xoxoxo

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No problem

I love the first chapter. The flashback is so real. There are some mistakes that can be easily fixed. I want to see how these characters develop overtime. I hope you keep going. Well done!

Love this chapter. A few grammatical errors but that's okay. Well done!

I love this. The way everything is presented is just amazing. You continue to amaze me again.

thanks for the honesty. I'll work on it for future reference