still absolutely riveted by this story. You're doing an excellent job .

Manius makes me sick, he's so disgusting. Excellent work with your character building! I'm still completely hooked.

excellent, thank you! That means they're all where they should be 😁. Thanks for reading!

I believe that's in today's chapter 😁

thank you! can I ask, how many parts is it showing so far? it should be 6, but I think there might have been an error in publishing part 5. But it looks fine on my end.

Thank you so much, that's very kind of you. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.

This just gets more and more intriguing. Where are the bodies? What's with the rose? Will he find someone strong enough? I can't wait to read on and find these things out.

Ooh different POV, I like it. Now there's two stories to be intrigued by.

This is brilliant, quite descriptive, but perhaps a bit sudden? Longer build ups to reveals create more tension and keep a reader hooked. Well written though, and still leaves you wanting to read more.

Well that was a gripping start. Can't wait to see what comes next.

honestly, me too 😂 I'll figure it out eventually.

This story grabs you from the very beginning. The superb descriptions fully immerse the reader, and the characters evoke strong emotional responses. Very well written, and a real page turner.

Oooh he's a sneaky one. Growing more and more intrigued to find out where this is going. Keep up the excellent work!

Oh now we're getting to the real page turner stuff. I'll be reading all night at this rate 😂. LOVE Sergia, she's brilliant.

a***ww this was a really lovely chapter. I loved learning a little about his past. He seems like such a nice guy, a very loveable main character.

I'm glad you think so! I've never really written suspense before, but I'm doing my best!

oooh things are getting even more interesting. Also, this Manius guy is evil and I love it. Can't wait to see what becomes of him .

Wow! This is so descriptive it's like you're there with him. Absolutely beautiful. Cannot wait to find out what's happened to him.

thank you! Updates should be fairly regular, so you'll get your fix 😉

thank you so much! next chapter incoming tomorrow 😁