thank you so much. I wouldn't have checked the tag if you hadn't remind me

Are you planning on making the cannon characters appear like ash, Misty etc... ???

At first people quit because Qingyue is in harem and they hate her. And now that she’s suffering a little bit people love her and want to quit. Sigh poor author-san Besides it’s not like she won’t be in harem just because mc is not interested in her right now. The story hasn’t even reached canon yet ... Don’t listen to them author-san You do your thing! If they want harem they can look for those ff where the guy smiles—> the girl blushes—> they have *** and will love each other for the rest of their life. Thanks for the mass release 👌🏼

What was so bad about it? The reviews are pretty good.

Hey I love the mc’s personality and the idea in general. I think vivi would go well with him (a little princess, that would blush from time to time as he tesed her with a calm face) I mean considering his new personality and mindset Robin who is more mature. But I just can’t seem to see Robin with him somehow. It just doesn’t feel right idk. Another possibility would be viola (She could be the hot and sexy wife while at the same time being caring and supporting him, for example he’s working on his desk at night and she brings him coffe and stay by his side) Anw I really enjoyed the first chapter can’t wait to see more

Hey. Author already said in another comment that it was a mistake from his part. that Yami should’ve went for a month to increase his cultivation. But it was too late as he already wrote the following chapters by then. Don’t worry if you think that he wasted his time just spending time with his family, it’s clearly shown later than he made up for it by improving his understanding over his darkness element and also refining his fighting style. And the advantage of his cultivation technique is that he could go from Nascent Profound to Tyrant in a few seconds as long as he have enough beasts so Yami’s cultivation will grow quickly in the next chapters if you haven’t read them yet. Hope I could help 🙃

I think you should put some male characters in your dimentional chat group and have the mc Ntr them. Like issei and make him think that mc wants to help him get with rias when in reality he fucks her behind his back

Mc of nanomancer is a girl

Hmm 🤔 Yuanba is 4 so he can’t react much As for Qingyi she knew that he was more mature than others since the bath incident when he teased her so she didn’t see him as a kid? Idk I mean he never really acted a 100% like a kid ever since he woke up. I guess it’s more like his actions are sometimes influenced by his young age like when he could enjoy running around the city with Yuanba or when he got embarrassed in his first meeting with Qingyi whereas he wouldn’t have reacted the same way if we only take into account his mental age. Sure Hongyi would probably raise an eyebrow in surprise if he heard him swear but in this context there’s no one to react since they’re just kids in the end. Qingyue is still 16 so she didn’t think much of it and instead concentrated on the part where he indireclty insulted her.

She has the heart of snow glazed glass. Depsite what its name make you believe she doesn’t have an affinity with ice. It’s just in the name

He focused on getting better at his powers 😕. I don’t understand why pple think that the stronger in cultivation u are the stronger u are when it’s all about fighting power and not cultivation rank. In the first place he decided to soend his youth in the Xiao clan to spend more time with his family. So it was a good opportunity to “sharpen” his fighting style.

Nah Xiao Lie is the strongest of the xiao clan and is at 9th Spiritual

I just have to say : READ IT Can’t wait to see how the power of solo levling will fair in the one piece universe but I’m sure Monkey will make it an enjoyable fanfic.

I like ur fanfic it’s just the way he gives op cultivation technique and ressources to anyone like candy that kinda weirds me off but meh whatever that’s just my lpinion

Enjoyed the chapter. Can you post a chapter when you’re done editing all the previous ones so that we can reread the whole thing without hqving to gk back and forth please? Also just an advice You can copy moves from Kizaru (One piece: lazer beam/light Sword) or Sting (Fairy tail: Holy ray/the stigmat that rootes the opponent is cool too) there are also other moves like make himself invisible by manipulating light or use it like a flash grenade (upgraded version of his first ability)

Wow pls don’t start with the whole “I will make this world better kind of philosophy” It’s just a ff, mc doesn’t have time for that between fucking his harem and smacking faces

Maybe write about their first year in middle school since you introduced bokuto and the 3 monsters of nekoma. their characters are interesting so maybe yoh could write about them. and then skip to highschool. Can’t wait for the scrne when he meets kyoko

Nice got the first one

Finally the story can move on. We’ve stuck at his first day in japan for almost 2 weeks now sight. Anw good luck for the rest author san I’m expecting more face slapping and fluff 😊