Steven_Spoon

I enjoyed that you were able to describe and capture the feeling of him panicking in that moment and basically making all the wrong choices. Let's be honest we all have had that moment in life, more than once.

Easily the best chapter you have written so far. Was laughing so hard throughout it. I can't believe he would call his wives friends. lol

I haven't read your other book, but I am sure it's good, just not into harems. this book right here, though, is absolute 🔥.

Yankees suck! lol

master author, why do you do this to me?! you just end it there? with that monumental cliffhanger? GEEEEZ!

How can it not be Detroit. Grandpa and grandson together on the same MLB team would be awsom and to good to pass up when writing a story.

take your time and come back when you're ready. I would rather see writing with motivation than you just drop an incredible story due to being burnt out.

got it. 👍

it should be " 2,000" not "2.000" no more periods for bug numbers.

I was expecting a dragon, considering how hard he was trying to get one earlier.