Sorry author, i just cant resonate with how the mc behaves. He is to much of a beta male. And even with a system, he acts all scared from a bug when he is in a safe environment.
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The first chapter he said he didn't want to be a slave and rather die but here, he flowers from death. Pathetic. It's confusing author, edit the first part
I enjoy reading this novel. It has an interesting approach on emotions and the like. More realistic and easily digested but, ... Killua is too strong for starters. It is good. For short term novel but not in the long run.
As a reader of fan fiction, I can't say that this is really a fan fiction.
The author should have created his own novel. And honestly, this is just disgusting to read.