thanks for the new chapter even though it's not your posting Date I encourage you to keep going

I can't honestly say that I reach a book every week and I don't never comment there's nothing for me to come in about other than you only posting one chapter week other than that it's a good story and I think it's a lot more people that read your book that you don't know about because they don't comment

crew 2

bro can you keep writing I like this book I haven't found any supernatural books that I like so can you keep going with the story

happy birthday bro enjoy your day man and keep up the good work

keep up the good work man I like this book

twins in The walking Dead

I got a headache from reading this I mean it's cool and all but I'm not a dungeon and dragon player so it's confusing as f***but that's on me for not knowing about dungeons and dragons to understand the book or to like it

thanks man hey how do your updates work that way I can be ready to read it when you update

man I like this book so much bro keep up the good work keep right at man as long as you keep writing you got a loyal reader here

hey bro you doing good man just you know you good at writing bro you just write it how you feel bro it's a fan fit you supposed to do what you want in your own book you know so just keep doing what you doing bro

bro if I was you I'll leave it like it is but I start another story that's just fast and the furious with a little extra tagged in like give up my system let him buy different cars and abilities and s*** but nothing too overpowered

bro you just copying the show and you'll drop your own character in there every once in a while you're not even changing nothing

I feel like you should just go with your own thoughts bro and just write the story don't worry about what other people are thinking about it's your story you know how you want it to go so go at it

Trash

this book trash how can you write a story where the main character can't even think to use his power to make his brain smarter or use his powers to make his soul stronger how can he be a overpowered protagonist if he can't think of easy stuff like that so this book sucks all the way around

I feel like people here don't understand the tag of overpowered why would you cry about the author of the book writing about his character being overpowered from the beginning when it's in the tag that mean you shouldn't be reading this book if you don't like it look for other books is more suited to your style and quit crying when the Authur is riding his book the way he want to

bs all that money that they have now belongs to him he brought it to the family

I think it's because his physique and he's supposed to been cultivating and he haven't so his physique turned on him

the time starts when the last person starts the last test remember yaun was close to the first to get to the last test