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Overall a great story. Like any works, grammar mistakes happen rarely, but they are fixed soon and don't impede the story. The idea of cultivation became really intriguing after reading this. Characters were well thought out, and almost felt real. Was updated frequently before the story ended. The background information was just enough to initiate curiousity and a balance between information and entertainment. Much respected author, recommend reading his other works!