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JenniferdeBruyn

JenniferdeBruyn

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2020-08-02 JoinedCanada
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  • JenniferdeBruyn
    JenniferdeBruyn1yr
    Commented

    What happens next!?

    Ch 34 I am...
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    Draconic Reincarnation
    Fantasy · DragonArtist3D
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  • JenniferdeBruyn
    JenniferdeBruyn1yr
    Posted

    I love the story and the characters, and I am certainly waiting for the next chapter or part. But I have been waiting a very long time and am starting to lose hope that there will be a next part.

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    Draconic Reincarnation
    Fantasy · DragonArtist3D
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  • JenniferdeBruyn
    JenniferdeBruyn1yr
    Replied to _Neith_

    Me too

    Ch 11 Chapter 11
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    Draconic Reincarnation
    Fantasy · DragonArtist3D
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  • JenniferdeBruyn
    JenniferdeBruyn1yr
    Commented

    I really like your book

    Ch 6 Chapter 6
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    Draconic Reincarnation
    Fantasy · DragonArtist3D
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  • JenniferdeBruyn
    JenniferdeBruyn2yr
    Posted

    A very entertaining story with my favorite mythical creatures. The plot is fun and the world is very creative. I can't wait to see how the story develops.

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    Draconic Reincarnation
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  • JenniferdeBruyn
    JenniferdeBruyn2yr
    Commented

    Wow

    Ch 3 Chapter 3
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    Draconic Reincarnation
    Fantasy · DragonArtist3D
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  • JenniferdeBruyn
    JenniferdeBruyn2yr
    Commented

    What a unique name for a dragon.

        "Then, my mate, we have a pretty daughter, Zavi." Zavi? Is that my name now?"
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    Draconic Reincarnation
    Fantasy · DragonArtist3D
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  • JenniferdeBruyn
    JenniferdeBruyn2yr
    Commented

    Nice, it would be cool if you could add the perspective of the main character. From what I've read she and baby dragons so everything around her must be rather large. If you know what I mean. But very good, love the plot.

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
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    Draconic Reincarnation
    Fantasy · DragonArtist3D
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  • JenniferdeBruyn
    JenniferdeBruyn2yr
    Commented

    It's not a bad start. Very entertaining but could use a little bit more editing. Some spots didn't quite make sense with the word choices and punctuation. But I can't wait to see what happens next.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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    Draconic Reincarnation
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  • JenniferdeBruyn
    JenniferdeBruyn2yr
    Commented

    It would make more sense if you said "I took deep gulps of sharp, cold air" Instead of using the word "sharply" To me anyway, it makes more sense.

    Huh…? I lay in the dark, feeling as if I was underwater. Where am I...oh, that's right. I died. I...drowned, right? I'm not too sure how I died. So is this the afterlife? I tried to open my eyes and found they were sealed with some sort of gel-like substance. Hm? Now that I think about it, it feels like I have four arms and...a tail? I moved around a bit and found myself stuck inside of something. What's this? Am I not dead? A bright flare of light flashed over my closed eyelids and I suddenly wanted nothing more than to beat at the smooth thing around me. There was a loud cracking sound when I slammed my head against it, the pressure around me beginning to disappear. What seemed to be thick fluid carried me out of a hole, my body barely slipping through. I gasped for air but found a weird film was completely covering me. I tried to pull it off, my hands slipping each time. Why can't I get a grip?! It's so slimy! When it finally tore I took deep gulps of sharply cold air.
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    Draconic Reincarnation
    Fantasy · DragonArtist3D
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  • JenniferdeBruyn
    JenniferdeBruyn3yr
    Replied to Jackalope

    I agree loved the greedy chick's

    Ch 31 End of the Crisis
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    Is that a Wisp?
    Eastern · Suiyan
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  • JenniferdeBruyn
    JenniferdeBruyn3yr
    Posted

    The story is very entertaining and I am very interested in finding out what happens next in the upcoming chapters. I also can't wait see how the main character develops throughout her adventure.

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  • JenniferdeBruyn
    JenniferdeBruyn3yr
    Commented

    Wait thats it wait happens next, the cliff hanger. I have so many questions.

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  • JenniferdeBruyn
    JenniferdeBruyn3yr
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter, can't wait to find out what happens next.

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  • JenniferdeBruyn
    JenniferdeBruyn3yr
    Commented

    I wonder what significance the water prison has to the character.

    Ch 30 This is not fair!
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    Is that a Wisp?
    Eastern · Suiyan
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  • JenniferdeBruyn
    JenniferdeBruyn3yr
    Commented

    damn why the cliff hanger, well gotten keep reading now.

    Ch 1 Take me there
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    Hellbound With You
    Fantasy · KazzenlX
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  • JenniferdeBruyn
    JenniferdeBruyn3yr
    Commented

    This is really good

    Ch 29 Journey to Kaley City
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    Is that a Wisp?
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  • JenniferdeBruyn
    JenniferdeBruyn3yr
    Commented

    Omg, lol

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    Is that a Wisp?
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  • JenniferdeBruyn
    JenniferdeBruyn3yr
    Replied to t3ksp3c

    Confusing, but I agree

    Ch 27 They Won't Steal Him!
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    Is that a Wisp?
    Eastern · Suiyan
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  • JenniferdeBruyn
    JenniferdeBruyn3yr
    Replied to Hnn17

    hmmm

    Ch 2 Chapter 2 The Down-and-Out Female City Lord
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    Dragon Tamer
    Eastern · Chaos (Fish's Sky)
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