JenniferdeBruyn

What happens next!?

I love the story and the characters, and I am certainly waiting for the next chapter or part. But I have been waiting a very long time and am starting to lose hope that there will be a next part.

Me too

I really like your book

A very entertaining story with my favorite mythical creatures. The plot is fun and the world is very creative. I can't wait to see how the story develops.

Wow

What a unique name for a dragon.

Nice, it would be cool if you could add the perspective of the main character. From what I've read she and baby dragons so everything around her must be rather large. If you know what I mean. But very good, love the plot.

It's not a bad start. Very entertaining but could use a little bit more editing. Some spots didn't quite make sense with the word choices and punctuation. But I can't wait to see what happens next.

It would make more sense if you said "I took deep gulps of sharp, cold air" Instead of using the word "sharply" To me anyway, it makes more sense.