I didn't find the poker scene particularly cringe. It's rather unique and quite refreshing honestly

Pedo

That was unnecessarily stupid

I'm intrigued, may haps you send over some sources. For Reasearch purposes of course.

You do realize that SMH is shorthand for shaking my head, right?

Congrats, glad to see you back

yes, any time where two of the mc occupy the same space and he isn't just piloting both bodies realtime, is NTR. if you want to just "do" all his girls at once, you can just give him shape-shifting abilities. tentacles aren't for everyone, but who said you had to describe it that way. Write it like it's just his regular body. not like it's a lie either. With his brain power, he could just use biomass to make facsimiles of himself for each girl all connected to him by a tether. it wouldn't be NTR either, since it's literally just his body.

a hive mind is NTR, an overmind, on the other hand, is not. hive minds are a collection of minds working together. An overmind is a single entity controlling multiple bodies

this is just a retelling of the original overlord story in tensura. I'm 24 chapters in (which is current at the time of review). And all the same overlord plot points are there with slight alteration. There is a noble and king faction, the princess is a yandere, (not confirmed just heavily hinted) the kings right hand respects mc, he becomes an adventurer and takes a NPC who coincidentally is a dead pan emotionless type that hates humans. the similarity's just keep coming with slight alterations to when things happen. I mean the kingdom is literally the same with name changes to make it "original" why even bother making him go to tensura if he was going to just mess around with discount Re-Estize Kingdom. It was nice before this shitty rehash ark while all the NPC's are just reskins of the ones from the original story his interactions with the demon lords were at least something original the characterization of the mc is awful as well. It fell's like you smashed Ainz's general incompetence, and Rimaru's crutch that is great sage, took out their business acumen and kindness respectively. Now he's just evil, incompetent, and uses his skill as a crutch. his goal is world domination cause why not. Again, why even make it a tensura fic if I'm just reading a reskinned crappier version of overlord.

Bro, this whole chapter was just a status screen

Man, these fourth wall breaks are starting to really retract from the story it's like getting punched in the face constantly every couple of sentences. It's super jarring and doesn't mesh at all with the story. it isn't even a funny joke we all know this is fiction pointing it out every other sentence doesn't count as humor.

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I would love more!

without the big mouth

I'm so confused. She is from another world? when! he found her on the street during a monster attack. Nothing hints at another world it's even stated that her father, that hadn't even been talked about once! sent a secret message to her. heck I didn't even know she was a child until the end you say she's young, but nobody even asks about any potential parents. the way you jump around without actually giving any details feels like I'm half watching 2 shows at once.

He's one ugly mf