Great beginning!! Keep on it and I'm sure it'll become a huge success one day!! You are gifted, the writing is really well done and I already love the main character!!
Let's say it's a different kind of worm haha :)
I'll probably update the chapter to demonstrate that it is a "common" worm but different from a worm from our planet.
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I'm the Kaiju who will Destroy this World (being rewritten)
Shameless author review! I hope everyone likes it and please, if you do, use your stones so I'll know you want more chapters and it'll be my pleasure to make more chapters for you guys.
Gradually, Quinn's eyelids started to flutter open and his vision soon returned. His head felt heavy and his body was slightly sore. As he lifted himself off of the ground, he touched his head gently to see if he had injured himself.
Author supporting his own work. This is an action system story where the main character needs to improve his abilities to save the world and also struggle with everything bad that comes with it.
I've been thinking about writing a novel for a long time and, now I have the chance to do it. I hope you all like it! Make sure to comment in here, any criticism is welcome :)