To be frank, I didn’t know what to expect when I started. The description was vague, and I was kind of skeptic about turning away, but I’m glad I didn’t. I thought at first, “maybe this is just another prosaic eastern fantasy romanticist novel.” But no, I was enthralled the entire way through. This novel had something to say, and still has places to go. Keep it up. 🙂

Normally, this isn't my genre to read, but there is some real talent here. Got a little bored in the middle, and then it picked up. The quality of writing is pretty good, and so are your conventions. Keep it going, you've got something great going here.

Thank you for being honest. 🙂