Noc_Tristan222
An ambitious, young, and wild spirited person who would love to make some money but of course, to see people love my story is important. Please do take into consideration that I'm a newbie novelist. ☺
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You forgot the pronoun, Mr. Author. "His actions maddened me."
Do clarify, Mr. Author.
Hello, dear Author. There's a mistake here.
I'm afraid that this sentence is quite intricate. It's hard to understand.
Hello, dear Author. There's a mistake here.
I saw this just now, after browsing through some tags and glad that I saw it. It is a noteworthy story that is new. Although there isn’t any thrill yet, I see a good potential in the story in hopes that the story becomes more enjoyable. The pace so far is fine and the writing quality is decent. I am actually willing to try this out.
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I'm sad for spoiling but no problem.
Fun fact too, "No matter what Aura he produces." I think you got it wrong, auras are pretty important. Other than making people shiver or tremble, if utilized properly, one could even suffocate a person with just their aura. Meaning to say, the aura he produced has a high capability that already marks him a potent student and must certainly be cautious of whom to pick as a mentor.
A child of an Emperor. And plus, wouldn't that make Dexter look bad? I'm making him a role-model, someone wise and joyous. He never meant ill towards Lawrence. Plus, an emperor cannot force him to do anything, unless if it is obligatory like participate in a war. And Lawrence is, if you've already forgotten, still a minor, five years of age at that. So I don't see any sense on what you're saying. If you haven't learned, apprenticeship varies when the students accepts his mentor, and his mentor accept his student. After all, an oath sealed with magic needs to be said sincerely.
He must've been caught up to the fight huh? He probably didn't think of the consequences because he was ordered to fight his brother. Even I thought of it, why Lawrence didn't?