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The writing quality is good, and overall it's nicely engaging and interesting. it's probably worth a read. I have one nitpick to give, which is simply my individual opinion. It's incredibly war-driven, and while that is it's nature, it's to an extent that it feels unbelievable given certain aspects hinted at in the novel. compared to other stories with humongous plot holes, crappy character design, and rampant fan service, this one stands apart. overall I give it a good review, but I'm dropping it bc it's not my cup of tea.
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ohh, I love the explanation of how this works, it shows promise!
Dungeon Monsters: Monsters that are only found when dungeons appear. These kinds of monsters are extremely strong compared to a field monster because they have been exposed to a larger amount of cosmotic energy thanks to the dungeon itself, this cosmotic energy doesn't only strengthen them, it gives them a core and the intelligence to adapt and evolve. - 7white_wolf710mthCommented
look him straight in the eyes and say you'd rather die. he accepts this I'm dropping
"Fine." He breathed out. "There is one thing that should interest you. If you're ever at the brink of death, it will teleport you to me." - 7white_wolf710mthCommented
lol awesome
Leaving behind a trail of dark flames, I swung my sword at the first creature and promptly overshot, completely missing the creature, and loosing my balance in the process. - 7white_wolf710mthCommented
🤣🤣
Alex selected the ice kingdom because of the frozen flower guild; they Rank ninth in the top guild ranking, with only female players allowed to join; they are a group of solid beauties. - 7white_wolf71yrCommentedThis was one of the many commands Alaric had taught Pamela. After all, the chances that he'd rob a few people were, frankly, very high.
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idk, the whole feeding the slimes his family part literally immediately was also jarring
Alaric, with a swing of his sword, beheaded a woman, and 2 children all at once. The women had already seemed dead before being beheaded, but the children had looks of despair washed upon their faces. Especially Penny, whose worldview collapsed upon her death. - 7white_wolf71yrCommented
an Mc who actually uses the loo? 🤯
'Bathroom... actually I need to use it.' - 7white_wolf71yrCommented
nice, I like that it was only revealed now that he considered this. as if his arrogance is paired with just enough wit to tempt ppl into underestimating him
'I told the villagers that I'd raid the Ryders in 3 days, but that was obviously a lie. I'm going the day after tomorrow! Who the hell knows if there is a spy here? I certainly don't!' - 7white_wolf71yrCommented
I'm very pleased with this word choice
"Slimes, cuddle!" - 7white_wolf71yrCommented
thay would stave away boredom
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boy I have a dirty mind that this can kinda sound off
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it's boring if that becomes his philosophy
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woah
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this is actually aggravating to read
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say it 5 times more why don'cha
"You know what? I'm feeling a bit full," Valyr said with a light smile, telling the others that he was going to head back to the barracks and get an early night's rest. Since he was the new legend of the village, no one had any problems with that, with some even telling him to get a good night's sleep. "How about we both head back to the barracks, Damian?" - 7white_wolf71yrCommented
isn't he supposed to have been through all of this before. shouldn't he know of the usefulness of monster parts in forging?
"As to how we found that out, it was birthed from a mix of immense curiosity and immense boredom." Finishing his explanation, Valyr could not help but look at Damian weirdly, wondering what was going on inside their heads at that time to experiment on something like the Tidemother's blood. Nevertheless, to say he wasn't interested to try and use the blood for himself was a lie.