ChillPixel369

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ChillPixel3693 days ago
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Atleast take your money
I turned to Kazuya, who was still on his knees, clutching his stomach. He looked up at me, his face pale with fear. I bent down, my voice low but firm. "Consider this my last payment. Don't bother me again."
My Hero Academia: Rise of the Martial God
Anime & Comics · TheShadowScribe
ChillPixel3693 days ago
Commented
The abrupt POV changes are a little disorienting. Try to separate it in different povs
Later that evening, after I returned home from the dojo, the quiet stillness of my room allowed me to reflect on the day. I leaned back against my bed, still in my gi, and began to think about the practice at the dojo. What we had worked on felt familiar—many of the stances and techniques reminded me of the basic forms I'd learned from the system. But there were differences. The dojo was using only some of those forms, not all of them.
My Hero Academia: Rise of the Martial God
Anime & Comics · TheShadowScribe
ChillPixel3693 days ago
Commented
Was he normal person or someone from murim?
I remembered a specific technique mentioned in the books I had read. It was called the "Qi Liberation Technique"—a method designed to open up the closed pathways and unblock the meridians in the body. This technique allowed a practitioner to regain the natural flow of energy, but there was a catch: it required a massive amount of energy to clear the blocked pathways, and the process was excruciatingly painful.
My Hero Academia: Rise of the Martial God
Anime & Comics · TheShadowScribe
ChillPixel3693 days ago
Commented
How did he know where where to go if he didn't synchronize his memories?
The walk back felt longer than it should have, my body complaining every step of the way. It was hard to move in this strange body, every muscle aching from the extra weight. I could see my home in the distance—a two-story building with a worn, familiar exterior. The first floor housed a medium-sized supermarket, its windows cluttered with colorful signage and rows of products. The faint sounds of customers chatting, the clink of coins, and the jingle of the doorbell as people came and went filled the air.
My Hero Academia: Rise of the Martial God
Anime & Comics · TheShadowScribe
ChillPixel3694 days ago
Commented
Could have a gravity amplification ability to train himself
Once again, if you have ideas on what he could do to grow more powerful, please comment. I have some plot points in mind, but I am open for more.
Vandal Savage
Anime & Comics · Daoist3woUqY
ChillPixel36910 days ago
Commented
Just like Kira from Death Note nice
Nothing seemed out of place. I had left a small piece of paper wedged between the door and its frame before leaving, carefully placed on both edges. It was still intact, undisturbed. Only then did I unlock the door and step inside.
Marvel: A Man with a System
Movies · Ryder_Blackthorne
ChillPixel36911 days ago
Commented
The timeline of events is confusing. How much time has passed between him getting the AI, his mother's death and now?
Joseph never really moved on from that morning. He told himself he had, that grief had loosened its grip, but the truth was simpler—he had just learned to live around the ache. His mother was gone. And for years, the weight of that loss had crushed him. But now? Now, for the first time in a long while, the idea of moving forward didn't seem so impossible.
Beyond the Limit (DC)
Anime & Comics · ISBF
ChillPixel36912 days ago
Commented
You mean Lagos ?
Pietro had truly decided that Peter was good for Wanda the day he learned about the Lego accident. It was supposed to be a simple day—Pietro was on his way to see his sister when he heard about what had happened. But before he could reach her, he saw something that changed his perspective entirely.
As a Symbiote in Marvel multiverse
Movies · Kakarot1809
ChillPixel36915 days ago
Replied to Thecarim
Happens to the best of us
"Oh, I've been putting off physical training though... B-but if it's what it takes to become stronger...! Is it okay if I bring a friend over though?"
Marvel: Quest System
Movies · Thecarim
ChillPixel36915 days ago
Commented
Did he say his name to Flash?
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Marvel: Quest System
Movies · Thecarim

Nano in MHA

Just a random guy in the world of MHA with nanomachines

ChillPixel369 · Anime & Comics