Amazing story! The characters are very fascinating and enjoyable to read. The synopsis had already gotten my attention and the story managed to hook me completely. Hope to read more!

First of all, the synopsis is missing, so I have no idea what I'm going into. The story looks like it's based around Hindu Mythology. There are different terms mentioned in the narrative, which I think would be better if the characters or something else introduced this term. The paragraph are long, so you might want to break it. I liked the context you've given at the start of the story, but it also comes off as an info dump, which could be a bit boring to read. I also like the notes given to make the readers understand the terms. The story is relatively good in my opinion, but you should pay attention to grammar, and mainly the splitting of paragraph. And yeah, write the synopsis. Slowly improve yourself, and I hope it turns out to be a great novel.

yeah there's something like that a bit different than what you said, but something like that, its towards the end of the novel

there are plenty of other references as well

Thank you so much for reading.

I am sorry for that. It won't happen again. Those were rough times.

which comparision? The previous world one or the mother's womb one?

it's hawk's mom

yeah

you can say that

yeah I am so sorry. I was going through rough times those days, so I had no option. I gets better as you go no.

yeah he sold it. It was a mistake on my part, I forgot to change the name of the new staff. He sold and bought a new staff. Thank you for pointing it out

It's a good story with near flawless grammar. Even though I don't like romance stories, this got me hooked up. Can't wait to read more of it. Keep it up.

The story is very interesting. There is no point in the story where it gets boring. It always keeps you on the edge! The plot has action, adventure and suspense which I love and I would recommend this book to anyone.

I don't typically like novels that have a harem, but I like this one. It's not like the majority of those novels with all girls having the same sort of personality and I also like the premise of the story. Keep it up.

thank you for your honest criticism, I will try to improve it.

he got familiar to it during the short timeskip after the wolf tide