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You should be confused about Liyana. She didn't even have sex.
That's nice.
Will Claude's love interest stay the same? I really want them to stay the same.
Also the character interaction feels a lot more natural.
Please do republish it. The starting is much better than your previous novel. It shows that you have improved.
I really like the novel. But I want the MC to go through a situation similar to Yami and reach a climax which will also deepen the relationship between the MC as it has already been more than 100 chapters. And also probably a mental breakdown and power up...like forcefully awakening a unique element something so unique that no one has thought about. Also, Will the MC be a necessary evil like Eren and Lucas from "I will kill the author" who will do pretty much anything for the betterment of the world and his people. If you watched AOT you would already know what Eren did. And as for Lucas, he let a child die that made him question himself but managed to convince himself that it was necessary.
Please continue this.
Tf. That's only the prologue?!
Threaten*
You should use "The" before "One"