This is getting interesting.

This is getting good.

I agree with the comments for this chapter. I need to proofread my work, and be descriptive simply enough.

That’s some great world building.

This is honestlynone of the best descriptive writing I have ever read in this platform so far. Even though it is deep, it is fascinating and understandable as well.

Hi guys! To the people who are reading this disastrous work of mine in this platform, I like to give my deepest gratitude to all of you. I know that some are struggling to read most of the parts, but seeing that the reads are really growing lifts me up every day to write more. And just being noticed with this little work really means a lot to me. Again, criticism is allowed for this work, so feel free to do so. Thank you all so much!

The good thing in this novel is that the author writes magically. Although I am still looking forward to seeking the magic from the characters especially their background story, and the world itself too. I'm gonna put this in my collection, and will look forward to updates! [img=recommend]

I can never write as magical as this first paragraph of the second chapter