Let us disagree on the grammar part.

you postet the end twice the rest of the chapter from here on is a repeat of the text above

Hi, thanks for the new chapter typo dares -s -->dare

I like the story. it is to early to say anything about most of the rating categorys the story is avoiding most of my pet peves not grim dark no conflict for conflicts sake no killing for killings sake the MC isn't going murderhobo sadly the MC seems naive, but i expect that to change. while writing this i have read till chapter 38 (newest chapter)

seems -s -->seem

Hi, thanks for the new chapter. Typo: breathe -e -->breath

let me fix that for you: you should think about working for free, you would get a lot more people requiring your services than you have now because there is no paywall.

thanks for the new chapter

not first :-( thanks for the chapters :-)

hi, is every thing ok? you haven't missed a day in a long time or is it just christmas and corona? have a nice christmas.

what about the A/N, mid chapter A/N are realy annoying, could you at least edit that out? (maybe post it as a comment to the previous paragraph?)

hi, thanks for the story typo and am mode knowledgeable, even mode-->more

will dead -->will be dead or--> will die

his-->him

hi, thanks for the meal

buy-->by

hi, thanks for the new chapter