SalukiSands
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Is his plan... "your mom!" Wow. This is like evil genius.
Raze half the world to the ground because your world was taken. Tribulations that none of them expected.
It's rules 1 and 2 yall lol
Any good party of adventures is always going to care about looting the corpses and taking as much as possible. I'm glad they learned this lesson quickly lol
I'm just imagining them all becoming serious scavengers. They're gonna save people then ignore the people to start Harvesting supplies because they'll all be soo starved for coins lol
What a fire line and kick a delivery.
Very impressed that you can Google. I did that too. Doesn't change the fact I've never heard anyone say that and no one I know has either.
I guess I did learn something. But I won't be grateful for your rudeness. Thanks for everything else.
Dude he is so oblivious. You think he would care just a bit about the forest where he left his rampant skeletons lol
Language is the same age bro. Traces back to where all the other english came from. This wasn't super racist or anything either. Part of good writing is good vocabulary though. That matches both the speaker and the readers. Putting in words most people won't understand (like the large audience who has English as a second language, or anyone who doesnt use the slang) isn't good writing. Since we wanna pick it apart. I like the story. Keep your hate out of the comments and don't ruin it for anyone else. Whine about any country again and I'll report you.
You scarf food, a verb for eating aggressively. You scoff at an imbecile. Spellcheck is a jerk its a simple mistake in the editing process. But please fix it. it threw me off and it would help your opener fulfill its epicness (I dig it).
Scoff is something unrelated to eating food. Pfft amateur (an example of scoff) *almost any anime protagonist eating* (an example of scarfing)
If I recall correctly they're on a path that was something like a stone or brick road...
What happened to not needing emotion and being the best assassin? He left you wives!!! How is he gonna get past his Dao oath??? Ma Moxi, don't make me hate you bro. You were so cool....
So he bombed the whole timeline with his thumb thingy?? MiaoMiao is a terrorist guys...
Yeah bro... I didn't understand this when he was setting it up the first time. Enlighten me master Tian!
I love Autin Powers!!! He doesn't make me randy because I'm not gay, but he's taught me how to make ladies randy! And that's good enough. Better father than my dad who went to get cigarettes...
Our boy is up in here about to save the entire Xie clan lols