srry I got school and I kinda lost my drive

thank you for the motivation

It's a good story but it could use some work on it's Grammar and more detail on the world background

yeah that's a good idea

and it was also kinda inaccurate even though it's supposed to be fiction so I added some of the realistic stuff about ants

yeah I rewrote alot of it because I felt like he got op too quickly so I wanna go a little slower this time

I love this novel

I really like this but I think the writing is kinda confusing, like put the story in each individual paragraph, put spaces in between each other, other than that I like it

I can't guarantee it lol, I just started highschool this year

I dunno about that because I got school

and I'm gonna focus on this more and I'm sorry for not being here to create more

I'm back after two years with my 15 ye old brain

you are correct

thanks

MY ARM HURTS FROM TYPING OF COURSE

I know what you are thinking of 😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏🥰😏😏🥰😏😏😏😏🥰😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😛😛😏😛😛😛😛😛😛😏😛😏😏😏😛😏😛😛😛😛😛😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😌😏😏😌😌😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏 my arm hurts

S A M S U N G

gdlhsotzglarjsglaoyfyoaotslyYldltdpiskdluskdlgLhflufluslydlydpydoydlyxpyxlydlydpuxhldludludluufpufpudh THIS NOVEL IS UNDERRATED and I'm just giving free stars

This is basically A demons virtue but the mc is a chest instead AND I really think this is underrated like come on you have 38 chapters but 46.9k views? REALLY? so support this book more, you people reading this review

to be fair he increased his intelligence by almost double(intelligence stat was at 11)