Okay, so you're going with two personalities then? Intriguing. One is nice while the other is a sociopathic madman.......at least that's what I got from this

I wanna see some Lightning Magic bro. I'm a simp for Black Clover so this better hit hella hard as I'm gonna be pretty critical of it. Best of luck to you.

I'm still here. Just contemplating my life choices 😂😂😂......I'll try to have a chapter out today

Ah. Shame you won't be reading anymore. Thanks for reading fam 😁

P*treon exists. I could always use that

It's been a minute so I've decided to just smack my own review on my own story. I'll give my own honest opinion on the story and you can judge from there Writing Quality (5 Stars)- I feel pretty good about giving myself a five star review for this category. I'm pretty fluent in English and make few grammatical errors and there are little to no mistakes on my overall chapters. Story Development (4 Stars)- I'm giving myself 4 stars here because of a few things and its probably things you as readers will complain about. Due to the load of fanfics on this site, you've probably seen and taken note of things that you dont like. For Naruto fanfics in particular, and isekai in general, readers dont enjoy when the MC reveals or is known to be from another world. The most common reasoning is that said MC will be held captive and tortured followed by dissection. On this account I would normally agree with you but you have to think about who the current Hokage is, that being Hiruzen Sarutobi. Not to mention that this is an AU so I should be given SOME slack for it. I'd rate myself 3 stars but I believe I'll improve so I'm giving myself the benefit of the doubt. Character Design (5 Stars)- I believe this to be one of my strong points as I genuinely TRY to analyze how each and every character would respond to each scenario given. Some characters are a bit harder to judge then others, mainly being female characters, but I do give it my best shot. While there is room for improvement, I'll give myself 5 stars as a way of motivating myself Updating Stability (5 stars)- I update like a turtle for the moment but itll pick up soon. In truth this is really like 3 stars but I NEED to push myself to do better. World Background (5 Stars)- I feel that I'm doing pretty well in establishing the world so far. Once again this is five stars All in all, I do hope you'll give it a read. I promise that, despite some unrealistic tendencies that may happen, the plot itself and unique way I write will most definitely keep you wanting more. Much love to all of you.

This comment was less offensive and more hilarious. It actually made me laugh. I'm sorry you stopped reading man. Much love 😁

You can help the story by writing a review 😁

It's not done yet fam

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Gotcha. My knowledge on Pokemon is pretty good so I'll probably be fine

I know right?!

Such a simple answer.........draw it

I was actually just about to make a notice about that. I got a chapter coming put today as well as a side project. Do you like Pokemon fanfics?

And he was never seen again 🤣🤣🤣

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Working on it fam. Give me some time

That means a lot man. I'll keep reading your novel as well. It was a pleasure to talk to you

Bro.........love your novel man

A few things. Im in no way using this as an excuse but I'm a relatively new writer so if I fudge up in places then it's simply a learning experience for me. How exactly do you think are they supposed to act? A full on explosion and chaos ensuing? Panic? Insanity? I tried to portray it on how I think they'd act which, of course, could just as easily be wrong. I do agree that they may have acted too calmly but I did that for a reason. I'm merely a decent writer at best so bare with me........or drop it if you wish