RottenGabriel
Just a random guy who enjoys both reading and writing. My wish is to someday have a work of mine published. I mostly enjoy High Fantasy, Medieval, Isekai, Adventure/Action set-ups.
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RottenGabriel3yrReplied to OrionArcHaha real funny
(A/N= Just google them guys if you don't know their sizes. Though I'll be offended if someone doesn't know the size of a Husky.).- RottenGabriel3yrReplied to Illay
Yup. Working on it through the entire day. Really struggling with foreign emotions here
Unburdening - RottenGabriel3yrReplied to Pill_Guy
Typos have been overly present lately.
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I hope you have a nice recovery man! And btw, it might hurt to read this, but Shin is still meh to this point. Matter-of-factly: Everyone is meh and this story feels like a bad parody. but hey, it IS entertaining
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The thing is that males who reject the idea of complimenting or talking about good looking and handsome guys are those with the most fragile of manhoods.
(I shall skip the process of describing male model poses as it is mentally damaging to a straight male such as yours truly.) - RottenGabriel3yrReplied to Playa_3
I wanted to correct it but you did it first.
Omoharu got startled and immediately blurted. "What thee you need from thy, mortal?!" - RottenGabriel3yrCommentedCh 13 Chapter 13 Tournament of Feelings
- RottenGabriel3yrReplied to RottenGabrielCh 14 CHAPTER 13 SAVING YASAKA
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The problem isn't the grammar. The problem is how many conversations and scenes you skip. And he was supposed to make the most out of this life but he is treating everything like and annoyance. And you jump from event to event without any sort of sign. You don't know how to tell a story, that is the problem.
Ch 14 CHAPTER 13 SAVING YASAKA - RottenGabriel3yrReplied to Daoist_Mandyana
Hannah was, at some point, but in the current year she presented herself as Hogwarts Matron, Pomfrey's previous job. It doesn't specify a year, and in canon Pomfrey ended up still working in Hogwarts, but since I already made this an AU were Albus Severus doesn't exist... why not?
His son followed suit, teleporting both himself and Kane. What greeted him was the sight of The Leaky Cauldron, but it looked a lot better when compared to the version described in the books and seen in the movies. Time, as one could guess, had affected the place positively. It looked clean and even the overall structure of the place had a fresh feel to it. As if the entire place had been rebuilt not long ago. That is when another burst of fire was heard, and Hannah appeared behind her son. - RottenGabriel3yrReplied to White_Clown
It's like those relationships that you have with other people and are close enough to be called cousins. Besides, even if by ancestry only, they all are related by blood. Harry is something like a second cousin or third to Neville, and even to Ron. While he IS second cousin of Draco. At least that is how I understood their familial relationships. But it is more accurate to say they are just friends.
When Alexis had finally reached the living room, the first of the visitors had already arrived. Harry and Ginny Potter, together with their kids, James Sirius and Lily Luna. The first one to greet him was his "older cousin", as they had grown up to consider each other family. James ran up to him and picked him up from the ground, throwing him up and catching him once again. There was only a six year difference, but the firsborn of the Potters treated him like a child nonetheless. Lily was a lot milder when compared to her brother, walking up to him and hugging him tightly. She had never treated him like a cousin, and Ginny could tell why, as she had gone through the same. Then were Harry and Ginny, who simple knelt down and hugged Alexis. - RottenGabriel3yrReplied to SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
Well, the first 4 or so years at Hogwarts are probably going to be like that. I want to actually make the story feel like it is written with the same excitemente Alexis sees everything. Things will get more "Mature" later on, but, that will be in a few many chapters
Ch 3 Birthday: Family, Friends and Gifts - RottenGabriel3yrReplied to Fellow_DaiostCh 3 Birthday: Family, Friends and Gifts
- RottenGabriel3yrReplied to Ciaran
That is James Sirius, Hary's oldest son, idea. It is infered that, after canon Harry Potter, he stole the Map from his father's desk. James is leaving Hogwarts that very same year, and he had more than enough time to memorize every single passage existing in the school. He also knew that Hugo, Rose or his own sister, Lily, were, by no means, prankers. That was the reason he gave the map to the other closest male "cousin" he had. Besides, I just wanted Alexis to have the map, as it is more useful in Hogwarts than his Phone, and combined they make the ultimate tracking kit, teehe.
Ch 3 Birthday: Family, Friends and Gifts - RottenGabriel3yrReplied to White_ClownCh 3 Birthday: Family, Friends and Gifts