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heimdallsgothi9mthCommentedTitles, not tittles
Instead of discussing with Evangeline Daimon opened the tittles tab, with all that has happened he has actually not explored all the tabs from the system and the tittles were not his top priority back then, so far, he had only one tittle unlocked.- heimdallsgothi10mthPosted
average when compared to similar novels using this trope. Typical errors are using the wrong genders when referring to known characters, even switching in the same sentance
detailWorldwide Class Change: With No Class, I Become Stronger Whenever I Enter The AbyssGames · Dungeon King - heimdallsgothi3yrCommented
This should read as "I'll do as you said."
Duan Ling Tian smiled and nodded. "You have ambition! I'll so as you said." - heimdallsgothi3yrCommented
thatm should be that
Li Qing looked at Meng Quan as he said, in a cold voice, “Meng Quan, don’t be complacent. I was only careless earlier. If not for thatm you might not have been able to defeat me.” - heimdallsgothi3yrCommentedCh 217 Institute's First Attendance
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Newborn.. six.. then twelve At least its a different start. Its caught my attention at least
It was Ren's twelfth birthday and today was the day Ren's father Matias was going to teach him how to hunt. Matias had gifted his son a bow and some arrows, as well as a hunting knife. Valdel was also with them since he begged Matias to take him as well. - heimdallsgothi3yrCommented
At least there wasn't the chapter on learning how to walk at less than a year..etc. Super disciplined babies are kinda strange
It has been six years since Ren formerly known as Kretos reincarnated and turned into a human. As he grew up, he now understood a lot of things, about his family, this village, and the world around him. - heimdallsgothi3yrCommentedCh 836 Battlefield (Part 2)
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Strange since he usually forgets hes an alchemist at all
Medicinal pills with low purity were an eyesore to him. He did not even bother to put grade one medicinal pills into his Spatial Ring. - heimdallsgothi3yrCommented
I love it when a plan comes together
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a sniper and arched should read a sniper and Archer
A sniper and arched seemed to be extremely different, yet they achieved the same objective by different methods. - heimdallsgothi3yrReplied to Darth_Xiane"Besides that, when I encountered the Devilseal Tablet all those years ago, there was a formidable soul sealed within it… In other words, the Devilseal Tablet is able to seal souls!"
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This should read "Ask him what 'good deed' he has done," rather than Ask him what 'good deed' he as done." The usage of gone really makes no sense here
"What do I mean?" Duan Ling Tian’s gaze abruptly turned to converge onto the final figure that slowly soared into the sky. "I’m afraid Patriarch Zhu has to ask your precious son about this! Ask him what ‘good deed’ he has gone." - heimdallsgothi3yrCommented
Suddenly, a loud bang sounded, not a loud band Precisely, I was expecting a troupe of musicians, not a fight.
Suddenly, a loud band sounded out by Duan Ling Tian’s ears. - heimdallsgothi3yrCommented
spear not speak
Luo Zhan struck out with his speak like a wyrm leaving its cave, striking to the point that the airflow transformed into ripples that undulated and swept out. - heimdallsgothi3yrCommented
greatly improve.. not great improve
"Unfortunately, although the Rebirth Pill could be called heaven defying, and is able to great improve my cultivation… I only have a core medicinal catalyst." Duan Ling Tian sighed. - heimdallsgothi3yrCommented
graveless death, not graceless death
"Duan Ling Tian, you killed experts of my estate, humiliated my son, and humiliated my estate! I’ll surely make you die a graceless death! Imperial Brother is able to protect you for some time, but he can’t protect you forever!" Boundless killing intent was brewing in Prince Sheng’s heart. - heimdallsgothi3yrCommented
senile, not senior
"Your grandfather isn’t senior, he’d extremely sober." Duan Ling Tian replied with all seriousness.