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Chapter 46 - LOL Being carried by someone with vomit on them doesn't quite cut it in the romantic gestures list.🙄

Chapter 23 - so Serena thought to clean the room but not to get the morning-after pill for Cassie ? Talk about so-not-a-genius !

I'm up to chapter 47 and don't want to stop reading... but it's after midnight. The way the author was spouting medical jargon reminded me of when my husband was in medical school. I was helping him review for an anatomy test and struggling with the terminology. About one AM, I hit " flexor digitorum profundus". I threw the notebook at him and went to bed. That phrase became a running family joke. Thank you for a great story.👍👍

The one problem I have with this otherwise good book is the Ying Luwei haemophilia plot line. Because of what I know about haemophilia in the real world, this plot line annoys me. Kind of wish the author had left it as an unspecified blood disorder. But I still sincerely wish the author success in her writing career.🙂

Chapter 134 I'm confused. What does the head of the physics group have to do with costumes ? Do you mean the head of the PROPS department ?

Chapter 5 Aurhor or editor... please go over this chapter and remove the paragraphs of gibberish. Thank you.

Chapter 159... Editor/proofreader/author... the name Teddy appears repeatedly and I'm pretty sure most of them should be Abigail. Please fix this. Thank you.

Chapter 1: Sigh..... I know "the plot demands it" but does Arwen really have to be so much of an idiot that her first call wasn't for an ambulance ?

Chapter 52 error. The name of Chi He changed to Pool. I don't know about other readers, but every time I encounter this problem it's frustrating because I don't have access to a keyboard to fix it.

LOL - The author must be VERY young If the author considers "almost 60" to be old. I didn't consider myself old until I turned 70 😁