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A general note to authors -- when the character names are too similar ... such as Yan Jinyu and Yan Jinyun... it makes it harder to keep the characters straight in the readers' minds. It also seems to increase the occurrence of typographical errors.

(Spoiler alert) the plot has some holes in it. It starts out that FL was a totally obsessed fangirl but later on she's a medical prodigy. That does not compute. It's like the author changed her mind almost mid-sentence.

Looks like there's a lot of repeated text.

This chapter 4 is a repeat of an earlier chapte. Please redo the proofreading

Chapter 97. Seems like there's an editing error mixing up Grants and Knights.

Going to stop reading here. I have better things to do than deal with these (opinion not fit for polite company) plot lines.

Sigh... grow a backbone Serena. Your foolishness is rapidly approaching masochism.

Ch. 75 This story is intense and riveting ! Hope it's not long between updates.

Chapter 531- if you're pressed for time, this chapter is a good stopping point in terms of plot threads. Thank you author for a really good story.

Translation correction - the crrect word in this context is "rope" not "robe"