Tameru

Will we get extra chapter this week lol

I tbh think it’s gonna be Leah but hey I just started reading this

So far this is the best twilight fan fic I read yet hope more chapters soon

This is one of the most real comments write your story for the people that want to read it don’t drop it for people that just like to run there mouth online

Tbh same Alice was by far best character I. Twilight

Tbh could stay on original plot and focus more on him and the extra Cullen instead of make it him hate Edward

Obviously this is a bad book so please leave 1 star reviews when you see this

Obviously this is a bad book so please leave 1 star reviews when you see this

Book is good world background is kinda lacking like you can create a nation within a country some stuff is really weird character development is kinda fast paced but overall seams decent enough I mean I read quite a bit on a different site.

The book is decent but it could of been so much more than the same thing every chapter you could of put like more work into character development then wake up son goes with sister mom father like it’s almost the same thing every chapter it’s like you forgot how to right and just slapped different names every other chapter and you practically say the same thing every chapter I give the book like a 3 star to a 3.5 star cause the concept of the book is good but like it could of been 10 times better