RAMINATOR

Just don't make me lose* The way you wrote it the sentence takes on a different meaning that DOES NOT fit in with the context of the story.

I, not i. You have to capitalize the letter I when it is solo.

who your family are* not who are your family are Fix your grammar.

Again with the naming error. If this is going to be a regular thing then Author, you should just save us all the trouble and find a tree and some rope and get to work.

So the Author is stupid then.....great.....

First, allow me to congratulate all of you. The way you worded it is wrong grammatically.

In a previous chapter you said the wood root was at 35% Author. Why the change or did you forget? If you changed your mind then please go back and fix the error and if you forgot then still fix the error.

It should be 2/10 because he earned and did not use a Beast Essence Strand in the last chapter while he just earned another one here making a total of two. Do you not know how to count Author?

I am going to assume this was translated from another language to English because this makes no sense in the context of what is happening.

The broken English mixed with what I can only assume is Mandarin is really jarring to read and is making me lean toward putting the book down.