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Great story. I love how you’ve mixed different parts of both Messi’s and Ronaldo’s mannerisms throughout these chapters. Keep releasing the chapters!!
Bro… Ace found the fruit after already having set out to become a pirate. He was stranded on an island with Deuce, and he was like 18
Great story, really enjoying it and I am excited to see Georgie develop into a beast. Really well written. It could do with some more descriptions of titles and skills he acquires.
Bro.. if both his hands are full, how would he “smoothly open the door”…
Fully almost cried
It’s called the “skull and bones”. Its a secret society that actually exists at Yale. They tap the shoulders of rising seniors and that’s how you know if you’ll be part of it. Lots of US presidents were part of it.
Beautiful. Wow
Pirlo, zidane, modric, gullit, seedorf, iniesta, maradona. In the prem i'll give it to you, but of all time??? nahhhh
Wow. Shivers. While I agree with those saying that some chapters have unnecessary information and loads of world building, I think it all helps with doing a special job at entrancing you in the story. We are still early in the book and only at the Joker arc, yet I already see the start of a great story. The actual sensation you feel as a reader when envisioning the actions of the characters is special and you really feel as if you’re one of the workers on set. I’ve felt shivers almost every chapter and I think it’s really important to immerse yourself into this to get the most out of it. Keep going and more chapter please!!!!
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