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necron_overlord2yrCommentedI like them chunky
"I like them big," His fireworks and bombs always created a flashy scene!- necron_overlord2yrReplied to War_monger
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So far, no one knew that Lucifer and other high-profile people were on the plane, except for the people that escorted them and the plane staff. L - necron_overlord2yrReplied to Victor_Weismann
ahh, that makes a lot of sense.
I need to learn more about the world of vampires. When I'm ready, I will talk to my parents about this world then, after all, I want to give them this 'gift' too, immortality... It's something everyone wants, and my parents are no exception, I guess… - necron_overlord2yrCommented
but... they're not virgins... right?
I need to learn more about the world of vampires. When I'm ready, I will talk to my parents about this world then, after all, I want to give them this 'gift' too, immortality... It's something everyone wants, and my parents are no exception, I guess… - necron_overlord2yrReplied to necron_overlordCh 70 A Bet for a Date
- necron_overlord2yrCommentedCh 70 A Bet for a Date
- necron_overlord2yrCommented
so, 1/5th angel?
Species: Greater Demon, 2/10th Angel, Fairy (Only Cultivation awakened.) - necron_overlord2yrCommented
um, she's 10?
This paragraph has been deleted. - necron_overlord2yrCommentedCh 225 A Cordial Visit
- necron_overlord3yrCommentedCh 314 165. The Ariana Family -3 (Part Two)
- necron_overlord3yrCommented
Not gonna lie, sounds kinda like God to me.
What did it matter if the whole world hated him? Xia Fei was no God, and he had no reason to save all of humanity. Provided that he could protect those people he found worthy, he was content. The rest of them could rot in hell for all he cared. - necron_overlord3yrCommentedCh 358 Gathering the Set
- necron_overlord3yrCommented
bruh, I'm getting flexed on by a novel character
He placed his legs on the bed and his palms on the ground. - necron_overlord3yrCommentedCh 398 The Psychic Curse
- necron_overlord3yrReplied to MicrosofEdge
I did mean 3D, because at the time it seemed like there was something more interesting causing the characters to make certain decisions l. But after reading it some more it seems that they only made those decisions because they needed to, not because the characters themselves would make that decision.
- necron_overlord3yrCommented
i want you to have ment 325 instead of 335 for my ocd's sake
Essence Stalker then ran forward with all his might, his halberd trailing behind him. Three werewolves came from the front, in a fan formation. One at 0°, another at 35°, and the final one at 335°. - necron_overlord3yrPosted
I'm only up to chapter 28 but so far the grammar and general writing quality makes it extremely difficult to read. The characters seem pretty 3-dimensional and thier development seems ok but the poor writing quality makes it hard to understand any of the world building. Overall it has great potential but without an increase in the writing quality, I can't give it more than this.