Review Detail of necron_overlord in I got summoned to another world, then married a yandere!

Item: I got summoned to another world, then married a yandere!
Rating: 3.6

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necron_overlordLv153yrnecron_overlord

I'm only up to chapter 28 but so far the grammar and general writing quality makes it extremely difficult to read. The characters seem pretty 3-dimensional and thier development seems ok but the poor writing quality makes it hard to understand any of the world building. Overall it has great potential but without an increase in the writing quality, I can't give it more than this.

I got summoned to another world, then married a yandere!

Sixth

Liked it!

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necron_overlordLv15necron_overlord

I forgot to mention that if the writing quality gets better in later chapters I will change my review

3yr

MicrosofEdgeLv14MicrosofEdge

3D is good did u mean 2D because we are in the 3D

3yr

necron_overlordLv15necron_overlord

I did mean 3D, because at the time it seemed like there was something more interesting causing the characters to make certain decisions l. But after reading it some more it seems that they only made those decisions because they needed to, not because the characters themselves would make that decision.

MicrosofEdge:3D is good did u mean 2D because we are in the 3D

3yr