AllMightyOne

We have to start slowly

Dam mc turned into a bitch over the break. Ngl im dropping now, finally a mc that wasnt stupid or a cuck but mc cant even have a backbone in him

Honestly, this is just for me🤣. Plus, this is Naruto bro like everyone else is a way strong this dude in the other stories

Thanks for taking the time to read

Shameless author review, personally, I have never written in a Naruto fanfiction, so happy to get some input on how my story goes because I dislike a lot of the other ones that are out there so I figured I might give it a shot! Let me know what your thoughts are

The story is fairly decent for being a Naruto fanfiction, I started to read the story and about 30 chapters before I decided to drop it because I want to give it a chance. For only being chapters and being 30 being to the age of 8 this is not going to be very successful long-term. It’s too slow paced and unfortunately the writer of this book makes the MC retarded. We’re having knowledge about the world, the MC is not able to influence any actions, most notably, the white fang die when he could’ve done something about it. It’s weird because the author tries to have the MC impact the story such as trying to create new medicine as well as fight madera Uchiha in the war, but Doesn’t try to impact the story in other ways which is retarded and my opinion.

Spartan slaves were called Helots

Honestly, it didn’t really have any significant meaning other than it’s a play on words. It’s a spin off the Greek term for slave

Lowkey good idea flr the next chapter 🤣☠️

Your right it was a lack of review on my part