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Thank you for the kind words, friend, and The Short Answer is: Yes.********The Long Answer is: Although I based the character on Jonathan, I made him a Noble Vampire from the Korean comic(manwha), Noblesse.******They seem to be a higher form of vampire since sunlight, garlic, wooden stakes, and religious/holy symbols hurt more as an insult than anything.*****If I didn't change that, then yes, Jonathan would've found a way to adapt and overcome sunlight. To make him special, I might even change him into a Kryptonian Vampire... interesting premise.*****Hope that helps
I just have to say, the way you painted the love story between Orion's parents was masterclass. I could picture the scenes, and the magic between them was well established and enforced incredibly without ever feeling forceful.I'm not ashamed to it that when I write future romance scenes, I'll be taking creative inspiration from your work. Beautiful done[img=recommend]
I've never had a story grab my attention from the first paragraph before. Your writing and use of words is mesmerising and almost, hypnotic. I've never read the Percy Jackson stories but that didn't curb my enjoyment of the story at all. Your character building and story development skills while respecting the original world and lore is top tier. I wish you luck in your future writing and I look forward to your works.
Although it's impossible to to create something perfect, I believe this is the closest we'll get to a perfect fanfic. The story is incredible and the character doesn't feel like he was just added into the story but genuinely feels like a part of the world. Your attention to detail regarding the world that already existed but injecting enough originality to make it feel like an actual harry potter spin-off instead of just another wish-fulfillment story. The character design and progression is refreshing and the way you imbue the story and character relationships with just the right amount of emotion that it never comes across as overbearing or lacking in depth. The main character is relatable to so many with his struggles and outlook on life due to hardship but also his emotional development when interacting people he cares about and who care about him is *chef's kiss* amazing. I struggle with consistency of character when writing but after 49 chapters and 3000+ word count each, you still stayed true to his beliefs while giving him an open mind to slowly accept new ideals is incredible. This is the first fanfic I've reviewed and I will add this to my top 5, which of whom, only one place is taken. CORNBRINGER's Game of Thrones: The Prideful One at number one. If your writing never falters, it might threaten that position My closing remarks are: It feels illegal that I did not pay to read this because of how good it is. 10/10 You have created a masterpiece and I wish you continued success in the future. Good luck and Godspeed
my fellow brethren, ignore the heathens who speak against your words of wisdom and go forth, spreading the gospel of our holy food. Pray that the heretics only one day, understand the true meaning of happiness.
If you could find the alternate version of Denzel Washington and make "Remember The Titans, Training Day, American Gangster, Book of Eli, etc". that would be cool