Pat713

Only bad thing to say about this story is the update frequency. Everything else, writing quality, story, etc, is great. Only other things I'd like to see is more background on Kal pre isolation.

Here's hoping this story keeps going until Noah defeats Heaven and Earth, and advances pass level 10.

Think June's law could be involving chaos, since she seems to spread it whenever she lets loose.

Think a better way is for Noah to discover more about Elbas's individuality, then exploit that to make him question it and causes him to become weak.