AGG8

she wouldn't have come asked for the money because she's always thought she got them for free. this girl is manipulative

disgusting

why do I have a bad feeling

dudes got a crazy imagination

those ppl are eating kids

iIknew those two were a good match

hehe little cutie

another evolution

I love this story but could you not use the word "smirk" so often. sometimes it makes the mood of some scenes change and readers get the impression that the characters are always being sarcastic, or at least i do.

haha no way this grandma is hilarious . I just hope she ends up to be a good guy.