Very Nice Story
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I really like this story. I hope it doesn't get dropped like most of the Star Wars Story's. Hope to read more chapters in the future.
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I really enjoyed the story, but the story development ist too fast for me . And sometimes I think the Mc get's thinks to easily.
But I like that the system doesn't dominate the Story , it's something different from other ''System'' like Story's .
I really liked the fiction.
The Store development is a bit slow but it has a lot of detail in the told scenes . The world background is taillight I don't know what to say about that . The characters where quite nice and I really like the change in emotion .