Raven_Diamond

So the other comments vanished probably because of the edits, but I believe I’ve fixed all the typo/language errors. If you find any more, please let me know and I will fix it. Like I mentioned before, I’m using this series to learn about other cultures and languages so if I get something wrong call it out.

I promise I’ll get it there soon. I am doing my best to upload chapters with bonus content (so it’s worth the repurchase for people following it from the old platform) and I am making some minor adjustments due to language stuff I’ve learned were copied over incorrectly.

Yes, I’m thinking it’s auto correct. I’ll go back through it. Trying to learn different languages and about different cultures with this series.

Might have been auto correct. I’ll check the base file and see if autocorrect or copy paste error. Thanks for the find.

I’d give it 5/5 if it had at least 1 ch update a week. I’m hoping as it becomes popular that will happen.

Very interesting premise. The writing is good with a nice length for every chapter and only very minor grammar errors. Been a bit since I could really get sucked in and lose myself in a book. If you’ve got the time, give this a chance.

I can definitely tell what’s going on and it dies suck you in, but some details are hazy on the locations and characters, relying on the reader having existing knowledge of similar locations/people. It doesn’t hurt the story, but just a small critique cuz everything else is so stellar I’m just being nitpiky.

So, I’m 100% biased, cuz I am the author. However, I am gonna give a little background. This story used to be on Mythrill, but Mythrill is shutting down. I have 3 seasons ready with 10 planned plus a sequel. It was in 20 or so countries with thousands of fans, so if you’ve been looking for it again, here it is. I will try to upload daily, but I do want to add scenes and content to make it worth it for those who brought in past. Thanks for reading.

I love the poem at the start. I haven't seen a lot of stories that do that. The premise of the story is interesting and the intro shows how the statue has developed into something more than it was. There is a bit of lore/info dump, but nothing too egregious. The characters are pretty clear and the pace seems to be good. I would say to give this one a read.

This story is pretty straight forward and dives into the action and character descriptions. There are some grammar issues and telling vs showing, issues that can easily clear up as the story continues. It is unique in the fact that it reads like a script at times, with only minor repetitive phrases. Overall, interesting portrayal of a story.