Raven_Diamond

I’d give it 5/5 if it had at least 1 ch update a week. I’m hoping as it becomes popular that will happen.

Very interesting premise. The writing is good with a nice length for every chapter and only very minor grammar errors. Been a bit since I could really get sucked in and lose myself in a book. If you’ve got the time, give this a chance.

I can definitely tell what’s going on and it dies suck you in, but some details are hazy on the locations and characters, relying on the reader having existing knowledge of similar locations/people. It doesn’t hurt the story, but just a small critique cuz everything else is so stellar I’m just being nitpiky.

So, I’m 100% biased, cuz I am the author. However, I am gonna give a little background. This story used to be on Mythrill, but Mythrill is shutting down. I have 3 seasons ready with 10 planned plus a sequel. It was in 20 or so countries with thousands of fans, so if you’ve been looking for it again, here it is. I will try to upload daily, but I do want to add scenes and content to make it worth it for those who brought in past. Thanks for reading.

I love the poem at the start. I haven't seen a lot of stories that do that. The premise of the story is interesting and the intro shows how the statue has developed into something more than it was. There is a bit of lore/info dump, but nothing too egregious. The characters are pretty clear and the pace seems to be good. I would say to give this one a read.

This story is pretty straight forward and dives into the action and character descriptions. There are some grammar issues and telling vs showing, issues that can easily clear up as the story continues. It is unique in the fact that it reads like a script at times, with only minor repetitive phrases. Overall, interesting portrayal of a story.

This story wastes no time getting into some adult action, which can be more enjoyable for the male audience or those who want a more erotic read. It is more tell than show and not a lot of emotional stuff to delve into (granted emotional caters to a different audience, so just depends on the demographic the author is shooting for). There are some grammar issues and head hopping. There are hints at other fantasy's the character has, which is common in certain animes (again could be playing more towards male audience and this move would make sense). You get a good feel for what the female characters look like, only a bit of white wall syndrome with the males (easy fix as they grow as a writer). There are a lot of cliches, not a bad thing just something to know as that might be exactly what you're looking for or it may not. Overall, I think this will be either a hit or miss depending on your individual reading tastes/preferences.

A very well written start. The characters are very distinguishable from one another and have chemistry. Only a minor typo that may just be due to how the platform formats things. The scenes are very clear; not overly descriptive, but no white wall syndrome either. It does have the usual tropes for this sub-genre, but I'm interested to see how the author continues to breathe life into it. Overall, worth a read.

It's a good concept and start, though a bit wordy at times. The synopsis, though repetitive, does draw you in. The characters are a little clichéd, but that's par for the course of this genre and to be expected. I anticipate they will become more defined and mature over the course of the series.

Yep, post rapture.