Finally, someone has written the Story of the Real warrior Sayan(Google Translator)..............................

google translation. This review will be posted on *** . Therefore , I will only give estimates .....................................lol........................

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Sayans are fleeing from slavery to joyfully become slaves elsewhere. The pride of the Saiyan Warriors? No Stupidity Of Slaves. To give the genes for research by the host? with pleasure. And.The beginning is like a bad fantasy that doesn't make sense.(google translator)

just a slave to the system. ........................................................................................................................

the story is completely changed, but Goku seems even weaker than the original . one event occurs after another without a break(google translation)

is it possible that at least someone writes about a Sayan warrior and not about a person pretending to be a Sayan (google translation)

An ordinary stupid hero who does stupid things and prays for the heroes of the canon. Infuriating moments as he says at the beginning (did not read further) with Bulma Goku... I see a Weakling - a Man and not a warrior Sayian . Does the hero get it ? the fruit of the tree of life and the seed. The seed destroys, and could just find/wish for a planet without intelligent beings and grow there.The fruits give an increase of *15 on a permanent basis. instead of training to the maximum and then using them, Raditz eats 4 with Goku(this happens almost immediately upon arrival on Earth when they are both negligibly weak). Reading the author's comments, you understand that the story will go as the author wants, contrary to logic. Translated from Google

"....Goku had just opened his eyes and saw a rough looking person somewhat handsome but also animalistic it was Yamcha the one who got killed by a Saibamen, Goku recently found out about his ability to copy and paste others abilities bloodlines etc Yamcha was the perfect target, he wanted to see if he gave him Instant Mastery how powerful he would become....." thank you, I'll drop it after that

..................................................................... Writing Quality 3 Stability of Updates 3 Story Development 1 Character Design 1 World Background 2 ............................................................................. .

Shishio stupid and hypocritica l.............................................................................................................................................

Great story ................................................................................................................................................

English is not my favorite language, I wrote through a translator. I wanted to say that the hero is a weakling and not a Saiyan. it's not Sayan to obey weaklings. I don't see a warrior, but a common man. Instead of a rag, I mean the weakling.

why are the main characters of Saiyan almost always such rags Story Development 2 Character Design 2 World Background 2 Story Development 2 Character Design 2 World Background 2

Story Development 2 Character Design 1 World Background 2 Story Development 2 Character Design 1 World Background 2

Writing Quality 4 Stability of Updates 4 Story Development 2 Character Design 2 World Background 2 The total score 2.8

There is no sense in the plot.............................................................................................................................

stupid MC................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Ugh... This is stupid. +1 The hero is weak and stupid, but the author says that he is smart and cool....................................................

One of the best I've read.................................................................................................................................