Maybe re-order some of the Dialogue it says she cups her cheeks and ask if she feeds her well it’s in the following sentence it says she’s waiting outside for them to arrive a little backwards

I like the book but some of the wording I get confused. I don’t know if English is your first language Or if the books been translated so some of the wording comes out wrong sometimes. I feel like they are talking in third person some of the chapters. I will comment on if possible.

Love this book already

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