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Wintermoon

Wintermoon

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Just a depressed insomniac that likes to read, write, and draw. Oh, and I'm a christian, too. Have a wonderful day. Or else.

2020-06-12 JoinedUnited States
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  • Wintermoon
    Wintermoon21d
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    I love this chapter. The message of forgiveness is beautiful. You did an amazing job, author!

    Ch 173 Ninth Gate: Bolt of Bronte (Part 6)
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  • Wintermoon
    Wintermoon27d
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    Oh, honey, no one has control over their own fate. It's all in the hands of God.

    Not that it would have changed anything, but at least she would have herself prepared for it. She still couldn't believe it. Was this real? Or was this a slap she has got from fate? The fate she has thought she has got control over.
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  • Wintermoon
    Wintermoon27d
    Replied to Wintermoon

    Although, now that I think about it, character development is a thing, so maybe this'll change as she grows. Who knows. But, again, great job on the chapter, author!

    Since the person was so friendly, there is no way Li Xue would treat her badly too. This was her principle to begin with, 'Be good who are good to you. But don't hesitate to show your worst to the evil'.
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  • Wintermoon
    Wintermoon27d
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    When it turns out you've already met him twice, and he happens to be your daughter's father. Oop. i love the irony here

    Li Xue didn't know how to reply to this, so she just smiled at her words. Sometimes a smile can be the best reply anyone could have. She herself has never seen a great man, she has been working for the last 5 years. None of the websites or magazines has set out his pictures. His name was enough to get the work done. Though he was the older brother of Feng Yi Lan, still she never got time to meet him.
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  • Wintermoon
    Wintermoon27d
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    I mean, I get your point, but God did tell us to love our enemies. Besides that, I'm enjoying the story. Great chapter :)

    Since the person was so friendly, there is no way Li Xue would treat her badly too. This was her principle to begin with, 'Be good who are good to you. But don't hesitate to show your worst to the evil'.
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  • Wintermoon
    Wintermoon28d
    Replied to Wintermoon

    Oh, and I'm making a separate book for it, as well as posting it here, in case you would prefer an individual book.

    Ch 100 Epilogue
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  • Wintermoon
    Wintermoon28d
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    Author, here. I'm posting book three at the start of November, if anyone's wondering.

    Ch 100 Epilogue
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  • Wintermoon
    Wintermoon30d
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    I'm only five chapters in, and I've fallen in love with this story. The mother-daughter relationship is beautiful, and as a Christian, I appreciate the Faith aspect in this story. Praise God for this beautiful story, and God bless you, author! :)

    Ch 5 Her adorable innocent face.
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  • Wintermoon
    Wintermoon30d
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    This story is beautiful, and no one can change my mind. ❤❤❤

    Though Li Xue was quite young when she became a single mother, this motherly feeling was something that does not come according to one's age. It was a feeling that gets built inside the moment the woman could feel another life growing inside her. A feeling of such satisfaction for which one can sacrifice her own importance.
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  • Wintermoon
    Wintermoon30d
    Commented

    Four chapters in and I have decided that I very much enjoy this story, and I very much enjoy this character's faith in God. Great job, author, and God bless you!

    Though these five years have lessened her fear of trusting others, and brought back her faith in God and people around her but still her dreadful nightmares every night never stopped.
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  • Wintermoon
    Wintermoon1mth
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    For some reason, highschool fencing classes don't sound like they would beat a pirate king. No offense, but this main character seems a little overpowered, like most feminist main characters, and it's kinda sad. I hardly ever get to find a strong, female character that has weaknesses and isn't immediately more powerful than everyone else. This isn't to bash you, please understand that. It's just constructive criticism, because this isn't how you write a good, strong, female character. Keep her sassy personality. It's wonderful. But if she only took one class, she should not be able to beat a Pirate Lord. As a woman myself, it's more empowering to see someone fight and work for power, because that shows that anyone can do it, rather than someone just having power, because that shows that not everyone can have the power. Maybe have her convince him into giving her lessons or something, and set this up a little more. Again, not to bash your writing. So far, I'm more or less enjoying this story. It's just a bit of criticism for writing a better, more likeable character. And good job with writing an interesting, amusing story.

    "Okay I admit my defeat Mila."
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  • Wintermoon
    Wintermoon1mth
    Replied to thegalaxysedge

    I didn't mean to sound offended, sorry. i I meant to sound a bit more joking at the end there. It's kinda hard to convey tone through text, so sorry for the misunderstanding. And I was trying to explain my logic, because I have to write this stuff out for myself sometimes. Again, sorry for the misunderstanding.

              Damon stared at her in disbelief. She punched his shoulder lightly, "I'm kidding. My siblings would try and eat them when they were younger."
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  • Wintermoon
    Wintermoon1mth
    Commented

    I hope you're doing okay! I'll be praying for you

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  • Wintermoon
    Wintermoon1mth
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    I love this line so, so much.❤

    "My child, remember this …," the Supreme said, as He stroked his hair. "Before I formed you in the womb I knew you, and before you were born I consecrated you; I appointed you a king to the nations".
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  • Wintermoon
    Wintermoon1mth
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    This books is absolutely wonderful. The story is amazing, the characters are wonderful and all have different personalities, the lore is intriguing, the magic system makes sense, and I, as a Christian, really appreciate the religious aspect of this book. I love this book, and it might be my favorite book on this platform. It's a really good read, and I recommend it. Praise be to God for giving the author such beautiful writing skills.

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  • Wintermoon
    Wintermoon1mth
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    Me too, Rania. Honestly, as a Christian, I love the religious feel of this book. God bless you for having the courage to write this book, and praise Him for giving you such wonderful writing skills. Keep up the good work, author. :)

    "Okay," Rania nodded. Then, with a warm smile on her face, she answered him, "He's the one who created this world. And I'm His adopted child".
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  • Wintermoon
    Wintermoon1mth
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    Links don't work, but oh well. What can you do?

    Ch 53 Told You
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  • Wintermoon
    Wintermoon1mth
    Replied to thegalaxysedge

    Icicles can form from frozen rain. That, and cities are dirty, so any snow she would have seen would have been brown, not white. That, and where she used to live was in a warmer climate than where she lives now. Listen, I wrote this like two or three years ago when I wasn't thinking about this stuff. I'm kinda really stupid.

              Damon stared at her in disbelief. She punched his shoulder lightly, "I'm kidding. My siblings would try and eat them when they were younger."
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  • Wintermoon
    Wintermoon2mth
    Commented

    So, basically, these doctors knew she was in a high risk pregnancy and didn't come up with a plan beforehand about what to do if something like this happened. And, you know, a C-section probably should have been part of that plan. I am not doctor, but I have done quite a bit of research. Inadequate doctors are inadequate. But, hey. We'll see what happens next.

    Ch 62 Heartbreaker.
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  • Wintermoon
    Wintermoon2mth
    Replied to BurntMeatPie

    Actually, yes, I do. She's one of my favortie authors.

    Ch 6 Chapter Five
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