Hey, are you okay? It's been a while since you'vr updated, and you recently had health problems, so I just wanted to make sure you're okay. I'll keep you in my prayers. 😊

I'm so sorry for your loss. I hope you found healing, and if it's okay with you, I'll keep you in my prayers tonight. ❤

Author here. I switched chapters 24 and 25, for those reading this as the chapters are being out out.

Author here. I swapped chapter 24 and 25, in case you're reading this as I update and you're confused.

Hey, don'r worry about it. We can wait. And praise be to God for being with you through this all. :)

I swear, if Calum doesn't check with Azalea on this... But, still a wonderful story, and I'm quite enjoying it.

Avarus, no offemse, but you're kind of a trash bag. No wonder your daughter is too. (And, btw, good work on the story. I'm quite enjoying it. 😊)

I love this chapter. The message of forgiveness is beautiful. You did an amazing job, author!

Oh, honey, no one has control over their own fate. It's all in the hands of God.

Although, now that I think about it, character development is a thing, so maybe this'll change as she grows. Who knows. But, again, great job on the chapter, author!

When it turns out you've already met him twice, and he happens to be your daughter's father. Oop. i love the irony here

I mean, I get your point, but God did tell us to love our enemies. Besides that, I'm enjoying the story. Great chapter :)

Oh, and I'm making a separate book for it, as well as posting it here, in case you would prefer an individual book.

Author, here. I'm posting book three at the start of November, if anyone's wondering.

I'm only five chapters in, and I've fallen in love with this story. The mother-daughter relationship is beautiful, and as a Christian, I appreciate the Faith aspect in this story. Praise God for this beautiful story, and God bless you, author! :)

This story is beautiful, and no one can change my mind. ❤❤❤

Four chapters in and I have decided that I very much enjoy this story, and I very much enjoy this character's faith in God. Great job, author, and God bless you!

For some reason, highschool fencing classes don't sound like they would beat a pirate king. No offense, but this main character seems a little overpowered, like most feminist main characters, and it's kinda sad. I hardly ever get to find a strong, female character that has weaknesses and isn't immediately more powerful than everyone else. This isn't to bash you, please understand that. It's just constructive criticism, because this isn't how you write a good, strong, female character. Keep her sassy personality. It's wonderful. But if she only took one class, she should not be able to beat a Pirate Lord. As a woman myself, it's more empowering to see someone fight and work for power, because that shows that anyone can do it, rather than someone just having power, because that shows that not everyone can have the power. Maybe have her convince him into giving her lessons or something, and set this up a little more. Again, not to bash your writing. So far, I'm more or less enjoying this story. It's just a bit of criticism for writing a better, more likeable character. And good job with writing an interesting, amusing story.

I didn't mean to sound offended, sorry. i I meant to sound a bit more joking at the end there. It's kinda hard to convey tone through text, so sorry for the misunderstanding. And I was trying to explain my logic, because I have to write this stuff out for myself sometimes. Again, sorry for the misunderstanding.

I hope you're doing okay! I'll be praying for you